"pale saffron skylight"
that far bridge at brillig
brumous with smog, nog rattling
over the scurry
somewhere else's island
aileron flap clap-smiley
not for the drivers
"At the end of the class I sent Professor Hamby a little parody piece, a rebuttal from the nightingale’s point of view to the moping poet sitting underneath its tree." A Parody Anthology. Also here. I go into widerruf here, as elsewhere. This & this just turned up. Another new one to me. This was for the General's poem. I can't think of any better than Phelps Putnam's.
My comment on "Horace and Friends": Fascinating stuff, & if i ever returned to my onetime idea of writing a book on poems that answered poems ("the art of the widerruf") i would certainly mention it. (The term is Celan's.) Everyone knows about Raleigh's answer to Marlowe, but what about this:
Ogden Nash wrote a widerruf once:
"Lines Written to Console Those Ladies Distressed by the Lines 'Men Never Make Passes' etc.
A girl who is bespectacled
Don’t even get her nectacled
But safety pins and bassinets
Await the girl who fascinets."
(um, you have to pronounce it "neck tickled" (ouch!)
Victoria added: "Thanks! There are absolutely tons of response poems in this period, it's an artefact of manuscript culture I think. Sometimes you get massive long strings of them and sometimes they are v. international -- the Pope replied (in a Latin poem) to a Latin poem by Herbert. For years people thought the response was Herbert pretending to be the Pope, and even commented on how it was very gentlemanly of him to give the Pope the best of the exchange, before someone spotted that the Pope's poem was actually included in his (the Pope's) collection of Latin poems as well."
POSTSCRIPT
I found out, Heraclitus, how long you hád been dead;
you weren't that sad philosopher, but a satellite of the Pleiade.
Unless there's lurking, somewhere in the desert, bits we've missed,
your "Nightingales" are gone as though they never did exist.
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